tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post3520656272528620817..comments2016-05-04T09:27:13.967-07:00Comments on Walk into the Mystery: Dance OnKylahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02921501156023116913noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-84338208265492003932015-03-16T04:04:13.184-07:002015-03-16T04:04:13.184-07:00Thanks, Claudine, it needs to be intense; it's...Thanks, Claudine, it needs to be intense; it's an intense love I feel for this gal, my gone friend. And again, the funny stuff of poetry, that "You. ..." bit was another that raised a question in critique. Sometimes the phrases that raise questions are also the strongest poem bones, I am finding. Not always! <br /><br />Thanks for the read and comment.Kylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02921501156023116913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-84172217720216113142015-03-15T19:14:35.928-07:002015-03-15T19:14:35.928-07:00Hi Kyla, an intense piece. I especially like these...Hi Kyla, an intense piece. I especially like these parts: "She shucked out of that body, slipped up that broken spine ..." and "You. You watch her blaze ..." Yanting Guehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04788603550626277974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-49210824154034334142015-03-15T14:54:18.636-07:002015-03-15T14:54:18.636-07:00Thanks, babe, it felt like it went true. Thanks, babe, it felt like it went true. Kylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02921501156023116913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-80526141391050217002015-03-15T12:47:04.393-07:002015-03-15T12:47:04.393-07:00Yea girl, you got it just right. Powerful!Yea girl, you got it just right. Powerful!Jenn A Whitecloudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15354978248114991183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-35578785683468322015-03-13T08:21:36.746-07:002015-03-13T08:21:36.746-07:00Poetry is such funny stuff. That was one of two pl...Poetry is such funny stuff. That was one of two places I considered rewording. Glad I didn't. Kylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02921501156023116913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9031402332610956671.post-61012646574450714762015-03-13T07:59:27.496-07:002015-03-13T07:59:27.496-07:00This is perfection.
"She shucked out of that...This is perfection. <br />"She shucked out of that <br />body, slipped up <br />the broken spine" I want to swallow these words. Thanks for this, Kyla!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com